Extraneous Detail

Extraneous detail refers to information that is not directly relevant to the main topic or point of a passage, story, or piece of writing. These details can distract the reader and make the writing less clear and focused. It's important to be able to identify and eliminate extraneous details in order to improve the clarity and effectiveness of your writing.

Identifying Extraneous Details

When reading a passage or writing your own, ask yourself these questions to help identify extraneous details:

• Does this detail directly support the main idea or point of the passage?
• Is this detail necessary for understanding the plot, characters, or argument?
• Does this detail add to the overall meaning or message of the writing?

Study Guide

To practice identifying extraneous details, try the following exercises:

1. Read a short story or article and highlight any details that seem unrelated to the main idea or point. Then, try to rewrite the passage without those extraneous details.
2. Write a paragraph about a familiar topic, such as your favorite hobby or a memorable vacation. As you review your writing, identify any details that do not directly contribute to the main message or purpose of the paragraph, and revise the paragraph to eliminate those details.
3. Discuss with a classmate or teacher a passage from a book or article, and analyze which details could be considered extraneous and why. Practice explaining your reasoning for identifying these details as extraneous.

Remember, the goal is to make your writing clear, focused, and impactful. By identifying and eliminating extraneous details, you can improve the overall quality of your writing.

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